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Proofreading Changes

Proofreading Changes
Feedback on proofreading for Only War

Moderator: FFG Andy Fischer, FFGMark, FFG_Sam Stewart, ynnen Topics: 23 | Posts: 318

Reinforcements for the Allies and SSU
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Diplomacy, Treachery, and Brute Strength
Preview the Multiplayer Battles of Cataclysm with Guest Writer Torsten Krämer
Play at Your Own Level
A Look at Adjustable Difficulty for The Lord of the Rings: The Card Game
The Black Riders
An Upcoming Saga Expansion for The Lord of the Rings: The Card Game
Hidden Threats on Dagger Lake
A Preview of The Captain's Command for A Game of Thrones: The Card Game

Chapter IV: Skills

by ffgMark

Published on 22 June 2012 - 03:01:56

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Reply #16 | Published on 10 August 2012 - 20:31:29

Tygre

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Page 71

Opposed Skill Tests

Example

Theleus is used throughout examples so Thaleus should be Theleus

Death awaits the unwary

Reply #17 | Published on 11 August 2012 - 00:52:43

Tygre

5

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Commerce

Commisariat should be Commissariat

Death awaits the unwary

Reply #18 | Published on 11 August 2012 - 02:02:36

Tygre

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Dodge

First Paragraph, last sentence

Canceled should be Cancelled

There is an additional full stop at the end of the sentence. There should only be one.

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Linguistics

Example Modifiers

Terrian should be Terran

Death awaits the unwary

Reply #19 | Published on 11 August 2012 - 02:44:45

Tygre

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Commerce

last bullet point needs a full stop

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Navigation

Stellar

last bullet point needs a full stop

Death awaits the unwary

Reply #20 | Published on 11 August 2012 - 03:01:27

Tygre

5

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Operate

Aeronautica

bullets points have no full stops. All other bullet points in the Operate section do.

Death awaits the unwary

Reply #21 | Published on 11 August 2012 - 03:01:56

Tygre

5

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Operate

Aeronautica

bullets points have no full stops. All other bullet points in the Operate section do.

Death awaits the unwary

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