Please don`t bother looking for the promised explanations.  I find mysellf laking both time and inspiration right now…

Sorry. :-P

STUN [ACTIVE] p.107

Minor typo: inflcts should read inflicts.

WEAPON CHARACTERISTICS, RANGE p.107

Change Close to Short range.

BLASTERS AND ENERGY WEAPONS p.109

Second Paragraph: Change Close range to Short range.  Change the last sentence referencing the use of a free action into an Incidental instead.

TOOL KIT p.119

Remove the word also from the first sentence.

ENHANCED OPTIC SUITE p.126

Remove reference to the Surveillance skill.

 missing descriptions:

• sabbac cards
• chance cubes

both of which should also have "crooked" versions, with the effects of them. (perhaps upgrading a die? or adding a blue to the gambler?

It would also be very useful to include page numbers &/or equipment categories on the equipment tables so one can find the descriptions easier

Rarity

p. 102, para 2, last sent

“knowledge” should be capitalized

Encumbrance Threshold

p. 104

Remove the “1” before the Setback dice symbol

Lifting and Carrying Excessive Encumbrance

p. 104, para 2, sent 1

“test” should be “check”

p. 104, para 2, sent 2

“Encumbrance” should not be capitalized

p. 104, para 2, sent 3

Change to “. . . up to a maximum difficulty of Daunting . . .”

p. 104, para 3, sent 1

This sentence should probably be changed to “Additional characters may help, adding their raw Brawn to the encumbrance threshold of the character they’re assisting.”

p. 104, The Example

I believe it makes more sense to move this example scenario to the end of the Encumbrance Threshold paragraph.

Concealing Gear

p. 104, para 2, sent 3

I don’t believe “Opposed” should be capitalized

Encumbrance and Vehicles

p. 104, first sent

“Ships” should probably be either “Ship” or “Starship” (or “Vehicle”)

Gunnery

p. 105, sent 2

“e-web” should be “E-Web”

Brawl

p. 104, sent 3

This is the only mention of cestus in the book. Should they be included?

Blast

p. 105, sent 2

“Engaged” should not be capitalized

Guided

p. 106, sent 3

“equal” should be “equals”

Knockdown

p. 106

The formatting is messed-up here

Limited Ammo

p. 106, sent 2 and last sent

“Quality” should not be capitalized

Linked

p. 106, sent 3

“Check” should not be capitalized

Slow-Firing

p. 107, sent 1

“Ion Cannon” should not be capitalized

p. 107, sent 4

“Rounds” should not be capitalized

Stun Damage

p. 107, throughout

I’m not sure if “Stun Damage” should be fully capitalized or not, but it isn’t consistent in these paragraphs

Tractor

p. 107, sent 2 and 3

“(ag)” should be removed

p. 107, sent 3

“Tractor Beam” should not be capitalized

“Starship Maneuvers” should not be capitalized

“Difficulty” should not be capitalized

Vicious

p. 107, throughout

“Critical Hit” should be capitalized

Critical Rating (Crit)

p. 108, throughout

“Critical Hit(s)” should be capitalized

p. 108, sent 1

This is an incomplete sentence

Ammo sidebar

p. 108, para 1, sent 1

“Star Wars” should be in italics

p. 108, para 1, sent 1

“Edge of the Empire” should be bolded

p. 108, para 2, sent 1

There is an extra space at the beginning of this sentence

p. 108, para 2, sent 2

“Quality” should not be capitalized

p. 108, para 2, sent 2

“one use” should be “one-use”

p. 108, para 3, sent 1

Replace “Despair symbol” with the actual symbol

Weapon Maintenance

p. 108, para 2, sent 1

“low tech” should be “low-tech”

p. 109, para 1, sent 1

“Repair” should not be capitalized in “Minor Repair” and “Moderate Repair”

Blasters and Energy Weapons

p. 109, para 2, sent 3

“Range” should not be capitalized

Holdout Blaster

p. 109, sent 3

Add the Difficulty dice symbol here

Heavy Blaster Pistol

p. 109, sent 2

Remove “weapon” at the end of the sentence

Slugthrowers

p. 111

Perhaps the description of what slugthrowers are should be in the opening paragraph, not under Slugthrower Rifle

Frag Grenade

p. 111, last sent

I suggest changing the sentence to read: “. . . have a pressure or “dead man’s” switch . . .”

Thermal Detonator

p. 111, para 3, sent 2

I suggest changing the sentence to read: “. . . have a pressure or “dead man’s” switch . . .”

Vibro-Knife

p. 112, last sent

There is an extra space between “but” and “one”

Poisons

p. 114

Perhaps this section should be moved to after Medical Ger on the next page for alphabetical reasons

p. 114, sent 3

The two instances of “Difficulty” should not be capitalized

Synthetic Standard Strength Anesthetic

p. 114, sent 2

“Stunned” should not be capitalized

Synthetic Standard Strength Neuroparalytic

p. 114, sent 5

“Stuns” and “Rounds” should not be capitalized

Prosthetic Replacements

p. 115, para 2, sent 1

“heart” should be “hearts”

Jet Pack

p. 119, para 2

“Pilot (Planet)” should be “Pilot (Planetary)”

Tool Kit

p. 119, sent 1

This sentence begins as if it were a continuation from a previous sentence

p. 119, last sent

“Toolkits” should be two words and not capitalized

Emergency Repair Kit

p. 119, para 1, last sent

It says they can be used once or twice. The next sentence says they can be used only once.

p. 119, para 2, sent 1

“mechanics” should be capitalized

p. 119, para 2, sent 2

“Action” should not be capitalized

Death Sticks

p. 121, sent 2

“Ixetal Cilona” should probably be lowercase and in italics (ixetal cilona)

Outlaw Tech Personal Stealth Field

p. 121, para 1, last sent

“Formidable” should be in bold

Customization and Modification

p. 122, column 1, para 4, sent 4

“he is left” should be “and he is left”

Installing Mods

p. 122, para 1, sent 2

“toolkit” should be two words

All Weapon and Armor Attachments

Pages 123-126

“Hard points Required” should be “Hard Points Required”

Filed Front Sight

p. 123, sent 1

There is an extra space at the beginning of the sentence

p. 123, Base Modifiers

“Close” should not be capitalized

Marksman Barrel

p. 123, Base Modifiers

“Range” and “Range Band” should not be capitalized

Spread Barrel

p. 123, Base Modifiers

“Range” and “Range Band” should not be capitalized

Shortened Barrel

p. 124, Base Modifiers, sent 2

“on” should be “one”

p. 124, Modification Options

It should be “Innate Talent (Quick Draw) Mod.”

Forearm Grip

p. 125, last sent

“Attachment” should not be capitalized

Czerka Firestorm

p. 125, last sent

“Attachment” should not be capitalized

Multi-Optic Sight

p. 125, name

Remove the period at the end

p. 125, sent 1

“the a multi-optic” should be “the multi-optic”

p. 125, second-to-last sentence

Change to read: “. . . to see around corners, and under and over obstacles.”

p. 125, cost

Should be “2,000”

Heating System

p. 126, Base Modifiers

Change “1d” to the appropriate symbol

Optical Camouflage System

p. 126, last sent

“Attachment” should not be capitalized

p. 126, Base Modifiers

“(Ag)” should probably be removed