Home Home Forums Forums Log in
Register Now
My Points  
My Games  
Board and Card Games  •  Books and Graphic Novels  •  Events  •  Fantasy Flight Collector  •  Fantasy Flight Games  •  General  •  Living Card Games  •  Media  •  Miniatures  •  Roleplaying Games  •  Supplies
Search the Forums
Options
Keywords search:

Search in Forum...

Search within...

Match...

Antiquity...

Player messages...
You are here: FFG Forums /  Roleplaying Games /  Only War Beta /  Proofreading Changes

Proofreading Changes
Proofreading Changes
Feedback on proofreading for Only War
Moderator: FFG Andy Fischer, FFG_Sam Stewart, ynnen Topics: 23 | Posts: 318
Planet Steam
The Star Wars Game Experience
Gearworld: The Borderlands
Fireborn
FFG World Championship Weekend
Chapter IV: Skills
by ffgMark
Published on 22 June 2012 - 03:01:56
Page 2 of 2 (21 messages) « First page... 1 2
Tygre
Reply #16 | Published on 10 August 2012 - 20:31:29
Tygre
5
0
Only War
Dark Heresy
Deathwatch
Warhammer Fantasy Roleplay
Rogue Trader

Page 71

Opposed Skill Tests

Example

Theleus is used throughout examples so Thaleus should be Theleus

Death awaits the unwary

Tygre
Reply #17 | Published on 11 August 2012 - 00:52:43
Tygre
5
0
Only War
Dark Heresy
Deathwatch
Warhammer Fantasy Roleplay
Rogue Trader

Page 77

Commerce

Commisariat should be Commissariat

Death awaits the unwary

Tygre
Reply #18 | Published on 11 August 2012 - 02:02:36
Tygre
5
0
Only War
Dark Heresy
Deathwatch
Warhammer Fantasy Roleplay
Rogue Trader

Page 79

Dodge

First Paragraph, last sentence

Canceled should be Cancelled

There is an additional full stop at the end of the sentence.  There should only be one.

Page 80

Linguistics

Example Modifiers

Terrian should be Terran

Death awaits the unwary

Tygre
Reply #19 | Published on 11 August 2012 - 02:44:45
Tygre
5
0
Only War
Dark Heresy
Deathwatch
Warhammer Fantasy Roleplay
Rogue Trader

Page 78

Commerce

last bullet point needs a full stop

Page 85

Navigation

Stellar

last bullet point needs a full stop

Death awaits the unwary

Tygre
Reply #20 | Published on 11 August 2012 - 03:01:27
Tygre
5
0
Only War
Dark Heresy
Deathwatch
Warhammer Fantasy Roleplay
Rogue Trader

Page 86

Operate

Aeronautica

bullets points have no full stops.  All other bullet points in the Operate section do.

Death awaits the unwary

Tygre
Reply #21 | Published on 11 August 2012 - 03:01:56
Tygre
5
0
Only War
Dark Heresy
Deathwatch
Warhammer Fantasy Roleplay
Rogue Trader

Page 86

Operate

Aeronautica

bullets points have no full stops.  All other bullet points in the Operate section do.

Death awaits the unwary

Page 2 of 2 (21 messages) « First page... 1 2
You are here: FFG Forums /  Roleplaying Games /  Only War Beta /  Proofreading Changes

© 2013 Fantasy Flight Publishing, Inc. Fantasy Flight Games and the FFG logo are ® of Fantasy Flight Publishing, Inc.  All rights reserved.
Privacy Policy | Terms of Use | Contact | User Support | Rules Questions | Help | RSS
About Fantasy Flight Games
Professional Zone