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Chapter III: Character Creation
Published on 22 June 2012 - 11:29:45

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Reply #1 | Published on 22 June 2012 - 23:26:15

Just a small one, but Page 57, under the Ratling's suggested advances, 'Eye of Vengeance' is spelled 'Eye of Vngeance"

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- Sun Tzu, The Art of War

 

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Reply #2 | Published on 23 June 2012 - 00:55:39

 What is the starting psykers Psy rating?  Starting talents indicates a pool of points worth of starting powers but no indication of the starting rate.

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Reply #3 | Published on 23 June 2012 - 01:00:40

Inquisitor Huntingmoon said:

 What is the starting psykers Psy rating?  Starting talents indicates a pool of points worth of starting powers but no indication of the starting rate.

That one I know, its written at the top of page 59, listed above their special Comrade talents.

"He who knows when to fight,when not to fight, will win."

- Sun Tzu, The Art of War

 

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Reply #4 | Published on 23 June 2012 - 07:09:09

Double Post - Please Remove

"A dirty mind is a joy forevera terrible thing to waste"

"Innocence Proves Nothing"


Reply #5 | Published on 23 June 2012 - 07:06:15

 Okay, should be in Chapter II:

Shouldn't the Elysians receive Weapon Training (SP)?

Also The Vostroyans seem to get a lot of Talents…

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Reply #6 | Published on 23 June 2012 - 09:22:17

 Most characters seem to be unable to communicate….perhaps all Regiments or Specialties should be given:

Linguistics: Low Gothic!

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Reply #7 | Published on 23 June 2012 - 12:00:18
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It doesn't say whether Storm Troopers get just Carapace, or Storm Trooper Carapace. I mean, yeah, logic, but it says Carapace Armour. And there isn't even a piece of equipment like that, since regular carapace is in pieces.

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Reply #8 | Published on 23 June 2012 - 14:46:39

Kerrahn said:

Inquisitor Huntingmoon said:

 

 What is the starting psykers Psy rating?  Starting talents indicates a pool of points worth of starting powers but no indication of the starting rate.

 

 

That one I know, its written at the top of page 59, listed above their special Comrade talents.

 

Thanks, I found it. :)   Still, since Psy Rating is a talent it should be listed in the talents list for the character…

Hope is the first step on the path to disappointment.

Reply #9 | Published on 23 June 2012 - 16:29:53

Kerrahn said:

Inquisitor Huntingmoon said:

 

 What is the starting psykers Psy rating?  Starting talents indicates a pool of points worth of starting powers but no indication of the starting rate.

 

 

That one I know, its written at the top of page 59, listed above their special Comrade talents.

Kerrahn said:

Inquisitor Huntingmoon said:

 

 What is the starting psykers Psy rating?  Starting talents indicates a pool of points worth of starting powers but no indication of the starting rate.

 

 

That one I know, its written at the top of page 59, listed above their special Comrade talents.

 

Thanks, I found it. :)   Still, since Psy Rating is a talent it should be listed in the talents list for the character…

Hope is the first step on the path to disappointment.

Reply #10 | Published on 23 June 2012 - 20:25:20

Santiago said:

 Most characters seem to be unable to communicate….perhaps all Regiments or Specialties should be given:

Linguistics: Low Gothic!

 

Yes that! 

 

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Reply #11 | Published on 23 June 2012 - 20:48:13

page 70 talks of Table 3–20: Example Female Names, there is no Table 3-20.

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Reply #12 | Published on 23 June 2012 - 21:05:37

 Under Creating a Comrade there is mention of Table 3-20 (female names) & 3-21 (demeanors).  There are 2 Table 3-19s now, which appears to handle both circumstances to some degree - names and demeanors.

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Reply #13 | Published on 23 June 2012 - 21:49:09
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PrimarchX said:

 Under Creating a Comrade there is mention of Table 3-20 (female names) & 3-21 (demeanors).  There are 2 Table 3-19s now, which appears to handle both circumstances to some degree - names and demeanors.

 

Those names all look female to me.

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Reply #14 | Published on 24 June 2012 - 09:06:07

Storm Trooper - Page 60 (Call-out Box, Starting Skills):

The 'or' between Intimidate and Security is not italicised.

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Gender & Appearance
Due to the special nature of the zygotes that make up a Space Marine's geneseed, all Space Marines are male.
- Deathwatch, Core Rulebook, Page 28.

So enough with the Female Marine threads…

Reply #15 | Published on 24 June 2012 - 18:34:59
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Storm Trooper should start with Good Craftsmanship Storm Trooper Carapace, not Carapace Armor (which isn't even an armor set).

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